Let It Go
Sometimes in life when you can't fix what you've done,you've just gotta let it go.
I easily forgive others but never can seem to be able to forgive myself.
But I can't wallow in the past.
Just because I did it then doesn't mean I have to do it now.
Still the guilt can take over me sometimes but then I have to remind myself all I can do is le it go.
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I really love this its very beautiful.
Really nice piece of writing.. If you extened this peice and made it a bit more flowing by adding comma's in some place, it would improve it immensely. These lyrics are good roots for a full song.
Hello and welcome to YoungWriters Society
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It looks liek you are still getting use to the site so let me help ya out a little bit. To post a piece of your own work please review two other pieces of work so that others have a chance to have their work reviewed as well. This review will be short because I didn't really see much wrong, but i do'nt think this should be in the lyrics section it's way too short. So may I suggest posting it in the poems section. Theres a forum just for lyrical poetry.
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Have a great day,
Tiffany